For what it's worth: The right red wing seems to be coming out of his head. The shadows somehow interfere. More dramatic whith a different key light position maybe? Different focal lenght to seperate the figures from the background perhaps. The look on her face is great. The red wings are simply champions-Stanly cup go to them- He looks a bit stiff (no pun, this time). Get ridd of the horizontal shadow on the white wing at right. Nice reflection on her hair. And an incredibly great expression on her face. This is good stuff. Qeep at it, Cimerone. Q

Un coup de dés jamais n'abolira le hazard
S Mallarmé