PoisenedLily opened this issue on Jun 14, 2002 ยท 30 posts
darkphoenix posted Fri, 14 June 2002 at 8:19 PM
his facial hair seems a little unusual without any hair on his head. its almost a seam. id blur the tops a bit. His right ankle is quite distorted, no human being bends that way. As already stated, the lighting just doesnt look right. You cant even tell where its coming from, it just seems to be all over the place. I think his wings should have a bit more arch to them too. Again, bones just dont bend that way. It looks ike her arm is disappearing into his hand instead of him holding it. The chain in the middle should prolly have another link on the top so it doesnt look like its painted into the wall. her forearms a litte thick compared to her upper arms. sorry to be so critical, im not trying to destroy it, its a great start.