big improvement. now a new slew of suggestions. The best choice for textures is to make your on! i know thats prolly not much help, but you can make better textures on your own than your likely to find in the free sections , all you need is photoshop and some good tutorials. of course, if you dont have photoshop, im sure thats easier said than done. Id be glad to make some textures for you for free however, if you tell me what you would like, because im interested in seeing what this looks like when its done. another few little knitpicks - the pose is better pov wise now, but look where his hand is touching her cheek, you can see her hair going through his hand. Theres a big red hair piece where his palm should be. the same with his wing, its going through hers. id moved his wing further away from the camera and her wing back away from his head so you can see the end of it. a much better job on the other hands though, but it still looks like her fingers would be slicing into his palm. I'd move his wing back and arch it more so it doesnt appear like its hanging limply into the groud too. otherwise, a large improvement overall.