Wow! Look at the detail in the wings near her right side. That's what you're looking for. Good work. The wing still seems to come out of his head, the red in her hair is perhaps too close to the wing color. Question: Am I right or are you using mostly infinite lighting? You should perhaps think of replacing some of them (read all of them IMO) with spots. Experiment with them. Add color perhaps, change the fall-offs, try using black lights. Have fun with it. Ya! I'm a complainer, aren't I? ... Stay well... Q

Un coup de dés jamais n'abolira le hazard
S Mallarmé