its me again ! a large improvement overall, a scene usually looks better when your focused more on the subject and less on the background. The wing does look a lot better, but now it looks broken too :( The problem with this view now is that yo can see so much more of the figures bodies, so a lot of little details need to be fixed in order to make it look more realistic. this is a problem with poser as a whole unfortunatly, so it will probably never look exactly righ, it just takes work and practice. nice to see that your keeping at it though. dont get frustrated. Anyway, a few more observations . His wing, at the top where it arches, the feathers are too thick, they stand out. Just those first 2 on the left. His shoulder looks all wrong too, like its dislocated. its not even with the other one. And his arms are to smooth. Shen the arm bends, the biceps flexes. His looks wooden, like plastic. You should probably smoothin his chest a little too. Where her hand touches the step, her thumb dips into the surface a little. The same with the chain, the first two links are good, the the top one goes into the step and into the link instead of through it like the other one. Additionally, i'd either make her thighs a little smaller or else bring her knee and ankle away from her body a little bit. And rotate the foot instead of bending it back when you pull her toes out of the ground. Finally, his hair doesnt look right. Where it comes off the back of his neck, it doesnt look like its coming from his head. I'd say it was a wig. For your final render, make a new layer out of it and motion blur the edges so it looks like its growing from his head. The front of it isnt as bad.