Absorbing stuff. Well, it passed the first test - it makes you want to read on and see where the story is going. My first thought was the pig was high on wacky backy (giggle). I sort of lost it a bit around the time Amy Sue started growing horns. I wasn't sure what was going on there for a bit and had to re-read a couple of paras. Maybe a slower transition from 'pig' to 'pig with horns' could work better. But that was my only niggle with this story. Nice stuff and just about the right length. Jack