That's a lot better, I'm afraid -for me- the text on the gravestone isn't quite there yet; and I'm afraid that I think my comments about movement of the woman are still relevent. I'm wondering if it would be wise to reconsider either the motion of the blood ie make it so it has already landed on her, or maybe reconsider the pose? It could just be that I am missing something! ;) What else... there appears to be some of the old style blood on her crotch that looks a bit out of place now, are you using layers? I think that is enough for now! Looking forward to version 3 :)