clay opened this issue on Jul 29, 2002 ยท 10 posts
Enforcer posted Wed, 31 July 2002 at 2:52 PM
Clay, as usual this is fantastic work. I only found three things that I thought could use some improvement. The scene with the probe emerging from the fog; the action seems to abrupt. The wall of the fog object is too distinct. The scene of the fighter craft w/ contrails; two things here... 1) the contrails don't curve with the path of the flight. They are always sticking straight back from the ships. I know this would be a difficult fix but it would add a ton of realism to the scene. 2) the stars can be seen through the moon in the distance. I hope these are seen as constructive comments. The amount of detail and the beauty of the scenes is something I can only hope to acheive someday. Thanks for sharing this with us.