It's pretty nice, though the lighting feels kinda weird, you can see the blond cast a shadow upon Miko as if the light came from the front, yet it feels like she completely under the light source. Also its very dark in the front, yet in the mirror the scene seems much brighter. Also you might want to make your characters look a little more natural by bending their backs a little, bow their heads or little things like that. These are the things I'd modify in there, but apart from that, its very nice indeed. Good first post.