Shiby561 opened this issue on Aug 06, 2002 ยท 8 posts
Crescent posted Tue, 06 August 2002 at 10:43 PM
nu-be, that was my same, exact thought! ;-) My suggestions: Shorten her neck, it doesn't look right. (Standard Poser problem.) The pose isn't bad, but the hair needs tweaking: it isn't paying attention to gravity. You may want to rotate it downward. It won't look right on a normally lit model, but it will work for silhouette. I'd change the color of the rocks to a grey-blue. Not only would it look more realistic for lighting, but it would highlight the setting sun even more. You might want to zoom in a bit more, so that the female is larger. She'd create a nice framing effect with the sun in the middle. (Composition-wise, she's placed well, but I think the picture would add more impact if zoomed in more.) The sun/water is defintely done well. This is a good start.