Hi star!!!, it's been a bit. & cat, Thank you I'm going to be showing these to tomorrow, and maby I'll show her these post's cause I think that might psyke her up a bit. Artax, Wow Nice critique. I tend to agree with you, I think the hand is what bothered me the most. It's almost like if it should be at the bottom of the frame. but there is one thing I always try to do when I train models, and that is to let them do the posing. That was where her hand was when she sat down in the swing, She really didn't move it much either, so I hit the shutter. I have found tht if you discribe the pose and let the models acualy do it on there own, then they learn how to use there body language by doing other than being treated like a pupet. Most of the time it works great, but there are some little things that you will need too ajust as I should have in the arm. Also, I have all of the models I work with take corses in makeup, hair design, and basic taloring as well, so that they can be compleetly independent when they get taken by an agency. If you ever "Test" for an agency,(Shooting a portfolio, and train the models) or discover a model it's a good thing to have them do, it makes them more marketable.