Hi! - like the whole series of shots that you have done with this girl. Good work. I agree with Artax that the "grip" of the hand holding the chain is too tight, needs to be a little more "open". Also, from previous images, I noticed she tends to look down a little. Try getting her to raise her chin slightly. It may work, try it and see. (same with the hands, I note remarks earlier that she has "long" hands). From experience, the best way to pose long hands it to make sure they are holding, gripping or curled around something in a loose style. Nice work and I hope these comments help.....Cheers...Bidsy