You do know that the lashes and lips on your texture are not rendering??? Probably need either a last trans-- there's one for Mike in Freestuff and need to check if Lips has texture added, in the materials menu. Might want to up your camera focal length to anything between 78mm and 150 for closeups. It'll make your pic look better and less fish eye-- unless you want that distortion for this particular pic. I don't think the scars look bad at that light, not sure how they would look in brighter conditions. The one on the left is a bit too symmetrical, docs are never that neat with stitches. Depending on how recent that is, there might be rusty black lines on the inside of the stitch marks. You're definetly going in the right direction, good luck! Emily