Just finished the first section. I plan to write the story in roughly three parts. The first part, introduces the characters, action and location. That's done now. I am going to post it tonight. I would like some feedback over the week or so if possible on what you guys think, before I start putting into script form. It would much easier to make changes now than later. Let me know what you think and any changes that you think that are needed. email me directly at butch@rabun.net thanks butch