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Subject: Writing Exercise #2 - showing emotion in a scene

Crescent opened this issue on Aug 12, 2002 ยท 25 posts


Shoshanna posted Sun, 18 August 2002 at 8:18 PM

The envy came through really clearly and the anger and jealousy were obvious as well. I got all those before reading your note at the bottom of the post. Didn't really see the sadness but when she calms down I can see that it is where her emotional state is going.