I think it's a nice piece of work. I want to tweak it (as if...hehe) for some reason, but can't really think of any improvement. For example: I thought about changing line eight to say, "but my attempts were all in vain." Then, I read it again and liked the original (using the word "resolve" twice). Also, I "stumble" over, "And yet, we are apart." Again, not sure why. I guess I want to have more spelled out to me and not leave it to interpretation. "Should I stay or should I go" reminds me of a song I've heard somewhere, too (grin). But it's easy to see where the title comes from. Seems like it belongs on one of those E-card sites to be sent out to people.