As you guessed its been a wip for a long time and you hit the point the last two lines. I've done several revisions, yours isn't bad...Thanks. Though as far as accepting a female side..I only wish thast were possible. My life is totally male drive drive drive go go go type "A" all the way. In my world there's "Yes" or "No" and no greys. I risk a lot by dancing in a male forum, but a poem about some guy getting his head ripped off in a football game is meat. Meat is meat and a man's gotta eat. As I told many other people poems are the graphic art of the written word. Color my world.