Forum: Writers


Subject: A Sonnet Revisited

tjames opened this issue on Sep 08, 2002 ยท 11 posts


tjames posted Mon, 09 September 2002 at 7:41 AM

a-b-a-b..c-d-c-d..e-f-e-f..g.g. You know I only count twelve ....darn! I forgot two lines somewhere. I forget which meter I wrote it in. Now I'm so bugged.Supposed to be ten syllables 3quatrains plus a couplet. I'll check the older copy at poetry.com and see what I left out. I think I broke down the And,And,And parallelism, but that would wreck my meter....Oh well a wip is one because of those reasons.