Forum: Writers


Subject: Another Poem to share

tresamie opened this issue on Sep 07, 2002 ยท 7 posts


tresamie posted Mon, 09 September 2002 at 12:21 PM

Chuck, Thanks (I think,lol) for the input. For the record, I am female, just in case you were going to ask, lol. I did repeat "love" and "resolve" for emphasis, and I am glad you liked it in the end. Seriously though, I appreciate you comments. I'm sorry you can't get the URL. Sounds like your server must be going through some bad times, if you can't get pages that normally behave themselves...perhaps you should call them. Oh, and I have a haiku that I illustrated in flash, if you are interested in seeing it, LOL. Mechmorph, thanks for all the thought you put into your post. It gives me much to consider. I do count syllables, but also listen to the natural rhythm of words, and sometimes a short line will emphasize a point I am trying to make. I will definitely revisit this one. tjames, What can I say? Thanks for reading and commenting, I will take your suggestion under advisement. Many thanks to you all for reading my work.

Fractals will always amaze me!