Forum: Writers


Subject: Vignette

ChuckEvans opened this issue on Sep 10, 2002 ยท 27 posts


ChuckEvans posted Wed, 11 September 2002 at 9:24 AM

The fine line that TJ expressed above has, seemingly, fallen short of gving the message I wanted to. So, hehe, I'll try to explain. Two people. Both lonely. Both "living their life" in front of a world sponsored by their PC. The vignette tries to show how a few seconds in time forbids these two from "meeting"...and perhaps finding each other in real life. But, alas, when the writer has to explain it, then it hasn't been written well enough. As TJ "suggested". Sigh...