Forum: Writers


Subject: Vignette

ChuckEvans opened this issue on Sep 10, 2002 ยท 27 posts


dialyn posted Wed, 11 September 2002 at 9:44 AM

I think if you had given her a name in the first sentence of her story, and then had the echo of the name in the people who left the chat room, it would have been clear enough, though I have to say I understood it perfectly well as is. Good job!