Forum: Writers


Subject: Vignette

ChuckEvans opened this issue on Sep 10, 2002 ยท 27 posts


ChuckEvans posted Wed, 11 September 2002 at 10:01 AM

There didn't seem to be a way to put the name in the opening but now that I read it again, I could have said, "...down Sheila's cheek...". Maybe hearing a name in the beginning IS better. Otherwise, it might be missed later on.