I understood the writing, still trying to find the 'love being pushed into the small of her back' in the pictures. Is this one of those images with a hidden picture inside? I could never get those. Chuck, Chuck, Chuck....you say you know little but your craftmanship identifies you as a bonafide writer. I had no problems understanding what was going on. It is a universal subject; YEARNING. I leanrt a little something also - how you make past tense seem present tense. "a bit itchy on her skin' threw me off the emotion - but that might just be me, I figured it was a metaphor that went over my head. Good piece Chuck. Thanks