Khrys: Your request for information seems to be genuine. I'm glad many others in here seem to feel the same way. I think you have gotten a LOT of good information in this thread. Also understand that some of the people helping you MAY be people who compete against you for dollars in the marketplace. And for them to stop and help you get some of those dollars is a very generous act. I can only think of one other suggestion that I haven't seen mentioned above. Take a look around at the galleries and find someone who does good work in "elf" genre (or just in fantasy). Or find a couple of people. IM them and ask if they'd be interested testing and posting a few pics with your product in exchange for your product. Heck, if you don't feel you have the artistic ability to show off the product in the remaining 2 pages alloted, trade the product off for someone else to do it. Finally, not to "toot the writers forum", stop by and get some advice on wording if you think it needs some tweaking. And keep at it !