Jawa needs to be a tad wider and soften up the angles a bit. Nose
is almost there, but likethe jaw, it's too hard, and your nostriuls
are too high. Your eyes here are too slanted, and the brow too
arched. Head needs to be a little wider. Mouth crease is too deep.
I can't see the original's eyelifds, so I can't comment on t hat,
except that given the original shape, I'd say your are probabley a
little too heavy lidded in the inner corners. None of these things
are severe, all very subtle differences. HTH >^_^