Forum: Writers


Subject: Just a Short One

Caledonia opened this issue on Sep 24, 2002 ยท 10 posts


tjames posted Tue, 24 September 2002 at 3:15 PM

how about for stanza 2 Sunbeams caress this sleepy place; And find the darkened sills; To kiss awake the silent face; In homes upon the hills. Well I tried to keep your structure intact TBT to the artist. (to be true)