DMFW...I thought it had a nice Twilight Zone kind of quality about it. Well written. It had that, "Have I got a story to tell you..." around the bar kind of feel to it. I could see a guy gathering his friends around and saying, "You won't believe what happened to me tonight." And you held on to the tone throughout. Very nice. And thank you for this challenge. I've loved seeing these stories bringing the goose bumps out on me. :)