She's really cute. The color of the skin issue depends on if you believe the legends or seek what might be fact. For my Shadowclash novels, I decided to create the vampyrs that were the fact behind the legend. Mine are biological beings just like you and I but of a slightly different species (sometimes they can have children together, on of my characters is a half breed). They are not the undead. The are living beings like us. The palor of the skin is because they lack the melinen (spelling) which helps us block UV radiation. In that regard, I think she's fine, although you could make the map a little paler, but not much. If you want to check out my book, go to www.buybooksontheweb.com and do a search for Shadowclash--The Awakening.