Forum: Bryce


Subject: Divided (WIP)

Incarnadine opened this issue on Oct 06, 2002 ยท 19 posts


johnpenn posted Mon, 07 October 2002 at 6:52 AM

I like what hewsan said about everything so neat and clean. I don't think it's the crack however. The concept rings loud and clear, and I like it. It's tough to walk away from a lot of work, but here's a thought: What if it were a table for two. It seems to be about a couple. With the other chairs, I get confused. I wonder if there's a family of 6 now, and if the children are divided equally, and that, IMO, hurts the overall concept. I think a long table, like you see in the movies of really, really rich or eccentric people creates a natural divide on it's own, and I don't think you absolutely need it. My first impression was that it needed a chandelier too. I now see that the reflections are the chandelier. It's subtle, and I didn't pick up on it right away, I like that. But some internal light might be interesting... maybe candles or something. It's a toughie, but it's strong in concept. Good luck with it!