Oh, I love this image! It has such a mystical atmosphere and feel. It definately tells a story and has "movement" in it. You're progressing wonderfully with it. I would only suggest that maybe Arthur could be leaning against someone. If he's mortally wounded, he's probably already close to death. How far has the boat been traveling? If it's been a long journey (or even a short one for a dying man) Arthur would probably be unconscious. Keep going. I can't wait to see the final render. Melanie