Whatkind of mac are you running? On my 17" apple display this image looks fine. I can easily see the landscape and the small details on the figure. There is mist coming out of the smoke stacks that turns into dark wavey smoke trails that then dissolve into the figure. The black clouds look to be a buffer that hide the sharp waist of the creature. Makbe just a bit less dense. And yes, just a bit more light on the figure...maybe pale green?