It's a start. Definitly more drama in the light will help immensely. Try different POVs, rather than the standard straight front shot. Take a stroll thru the romance section of yer bookstore for ideas. Those guys are pros at making it hot without making it porn. BTW I don't think the TOS sez anything about robots, might be a way to get around the censors if one were so inclined. LOL! IMHO Jon