Greetings. I was going to say I'm pretty new here myself, but it's been about 6 months now. Doesn't time fly... I like your image because it's different. It's reasonably well done in terms of camera positioning and composition but it lacks dynamism. There's no sense of falling, or movement, or anything happening. Which is difficult to achieve, I know, so don't feel too bad! Some very subtle motion blur would be good - in place of the flare! ;) - and maybe play around with the camera FOV. DOF would be even better, if your CPU can handle it. Right. I have 20 minutes spare. Time for a render, me thinks!