Poppi opened this issue on Nov 03, 2002 ยท 59 posts
Stormrage posted Mon, 04 November 2002 at 12:38 AM
Constructive critism.. Your characters are great. Your poses very well done. Postwork is fine.. The main flaw with each scene is the character is staring in the same direction for the most part. Your character rarely changes, and even then the new character stares in the same direction as the others. Try moving the eyes, changing the expression. Try varying the lighting a bit more.. Adding a twinkle in the eye or a reflection. Have them looking down, right, left up even backwards. Try tilting their head. Or maybe even try bending it a bit forward to throw off the staring off into neverland look., All in all good images but honestly not an excellent