Two images...the swarming of the sacred ground and the last three holdouts. You bridged the two with an AI source. I think it's best in this forum to concentrate on one visual at a time. There are those of us who are having more trouble reading large blocks of text everyday. The old glasses don't seem to be enough anymore. Now if someone could do justice to the last three standing with their blades ready. Gear them up in flack jackets and mega-weaponry (Is Crasher listening?) I think you'ld have a winner on the second part. On the first part. There's too much going on to have one graphic work. Other than that the story's busy...It does not suck. The focus just needs to be narrowed just a tad.