Great potential, Posette! Rough, but thoughtful. A warning though, sometimes the criticism here can be a little harsh. Take it for what it's worth, and let the rest roll off. You've got a good start, and I think you'll be getting a lot better and be an artist worth watching for. Love some of the ideas I'm getting looking at your work. To me, thats the best compliment I can give you: It makes me think, it makes me feel.