Great idea, you can almost hear the splashing. Oops, sorry I got to go, I take a diuretic for my blood pressure. :^) Like some of the others have already said, vary the level of objects. And maybe add a little more color to the sky?

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy