Hmmm.....I keep coming back and looking at this....and I really think it's the fact that the DOF is so deep that it really distracts from the doll in the foreground. Also my eye wants to see more of the the main subject so I think you cropped the lower right to tightly in camera. Don't take this the wrong way....I like this image.... I'm not sure how you could crop it now to get a better composition...of course you could blur up the background a bit if you wanted....I don't know....all just IMHO.

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