Quote - The Khair is pretty close to what I am after but it just has that annoying bang. Is there a way to get rid of it, or is major surgery necessary?

Go into the Surfaces tab and find the KHair. Set the forelock to 0% opacity. Doesn't even leave any nasty holes in the hair, unlike some, and yay to Mylochka for that.

Glad you're finding the fits useful; it's always fun when someone does.

If you wanna go the cheap route -- and can spot something you like -- I did a bunch of refits of freebie prop hairs for Apollo Max. Here:

sharecg.com/v/24898/poser/Apollo-Hair-Refits

Links to all the hairs should be in the ReadMe.

You might check out Celtx's Project Central (pc.celtx.com/). Celtx is a (very good) free scriptwriting program, and Project Central is where writers can upload their scripts direct from the program for either public or private viewing. Looks like there's quite a few scripts up publicly, and if you ask in the forums I'm sure you'll find someone willing to help out with your project.