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135 comments found!
Hey Dee. Decent one. Pretty dark overtones. In fact it makes me feel lke writing- A gentle spring day, Somehow there is no comfort When oppression weighs. Not having a good time myself. But will keep writing.
Thread: Spring Haiku Challenge | Forum: Writers
'Spring smiles sweet' doesn't sound right to me (the second Haiku). Something not quite there. Can you think of a better line?
Thread: The Expanded Scene Breakdown | Forum: Writers
This is very interesting. I think that's right-impatience kills, and wishful daydreaming that wants to escape the grind of really getting a piece of writing together or a piece of art, for that matter. They teach all this to us in the physiology lab, when planning an experiment, but we never seem to apply it to other areas of life. Thanks for the link. Fair winds and glad fortune to you.
Thread: Spring Haiku Challenge | Forum: Writers
The lights are back. It's bad when it goes for a day or two. The Haiku's second line should have read 'Isn't that absurd?', but then i was in a hurry to shut down. A gentle spring rain, For him who has ears to hear, Listen! The Earth sings. Warm winds blow, Crisp chill in the eve; Spring smiles sweet. Where do we post? Do you mean in the gallery or here?
Thread: Spring Haiku Challenge | Forum: Writers
Birds on wing? Ain't dat absurd?? Wings on bird!!! Hey Jon! Sorreee... Couldn't resist that ;) But seriously now.. whoops, lights have gone. Better post this quickly before computer downs. I'll be back with more.
Thread: Announcement - Writer's Forum - March Challenge - Get Writing | Forum: Writers
Hey, guys! After my initial petrification, I'm sure I'll achieve a rock-like confidence after your support. :) Your encouragement I MUCH appreciate. :)
Thread: The Gauntlet is thrown!!!...... | Forum: Writers
It's ok G. 'It's good to take our eyes off the blank page. That is not from whence comes inspiration.' Is this yours? May I quote it? I keep searching for stuff you've written-you're quite an amazing writer. Cheers! :)
Thread: Announcement - Writer's Forum - March Challenge - Get Writing | Forum: Writers
My entry's in. I'm petrified whether I've stretched the limits too much or entered it correctly. Do let me know, and no prob if it's deleted. It'll take me some time before I get the hang of things around here. :
Thread: The Gauntlet is thrown!!!...... | Forum: Writers
Yo! Pardon the intrusion, and forgive me for sounding like a doofus, but I'm rather slow to figure things out around here. Your gauntlet has been deleted, or is that my imagination? I was going to post something up, and then couldn't figure out what happened. What happened? Or is the gauntlet still out there?
Thread: The Gauntlet is thrown!!!...... | Forum: Writers
Ah! Pun-dits abound!! How I rejoice! Forgive me for seeming lily-livered. 'Tis the suspicious world we live in... but seriously, I'll be posting up in the challenge soon. There's a prolix one already out in the gallery, probably be a strain to chew. Ha! But I'm just beginning...
Thread: The Gauntlet is thrown!!!...... | Forum: Writers
Hey, I like this! But we be all artists whether by photoshop or pen. Shall we but feign letting blood, for loath am I to harm even one who by heart is a cousin. If thou beist circumspect, and hood thy barb in a merry note, why! methinks, 'twill be sport even for sombre miens who groan under the yoke of darkling thought. Or shall we, even as Robin's merry men, plant a pun or two 'twixt the virtual canvases?
Thread: Poem posted in gallery for feedback | Forum: Writers
A voice of one crying in the wilderness, or the cry of a hurting man? I weep with you, brother.
Thread: forms of haiku | Forum: Writers
Thread: forms of haiku | Forum: Writers
What! 'Tis here too! Yon canine hath the wanderlust! Zounds! Methinks The hour is at hand. Puns unleash!
Thread: A list of sites for poets | Forum: Writers
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Thread: Spring Haiku Challenge | Forum: Writers