Hi. As I read your outline/synopsis, the very first thought I had was: He didn't know in advance that the corporate benefit of being ageless was a short-term perk (in terms of eternity, that is) ?

If Prince Wicked has been duped or betrayed, you have a pretty good foundation for making the audience root for him. Well, the male audience, anyway.

You see, my second thought was: Cool. Queen Sorceress uses men. Uhhh...I mean-- only uses MEN to run things. As a representative of your female audience, I would very much want to know how she manages this. (hehe)
charlene