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Hmmm - Content good , but I would have to say the form needs a little work. I liked the message within the poem and the emotions you offered but the flow was off. In my opinion. :) But Opinions are like... well we all know the old saying.
Thread: Poem: Revelry and pride at the mortal condition | Forum: Writers
Very nice - I feel it had good flow. "My campaign of armies will end in one." - Would have to be my favorite line. Good Work.
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Thread: "My soul is sleeping" By me 8-p | Forum: Writers