OritH = 3 points Banshee42 = 2 points Weezie = 1 point

Thanks I am English but have lived in Sweden for24 years so my English does get rusty. Had to learn Swedish. One thing this wa written as a sort of test for ananimation series I am producing for Tv. My own production tat amselling to Tv.The frst in a series of 6. So there is a treatment and a proper shooting list. Thanks for your comments. Sometimes we become blinded to our own faults. Mavros

Thanks. But its actually a political statement about farming policies and subsidies from governments that force thriving communities to shrivel and die off. You just have to look at whatthe Us and the European Community is doing to Africa by dumping prices and raising subsidies to their own farmers. Sad really. Oh and its suppose to make you uncomfortable. Writing for comfort is really not writing. Thanks for your response. Mavros.

Just wonderd if people read what is posted and if so why no comments. most odd for a writers forum.