Andini opened this issue on Jan 08, 2003 ยท 10 posts
Andini posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 3:35 PM
ttops posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 3:49 PM
Maybe some hills or mountains in the background and some smaller plants in the foreground. Nice new start.
ttops posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 3:52 PM
Also you could lower the trees so that they're not sticking out. If you want you could also try experimenting with more realistic rock textures for the rocks in the foreground.
ttops posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 3:53 PM
Just some friendly suggestions, welcome aboard.
tjohn posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 4:57 PM
Good start, I agree with ttops on all his suggestions. I would add you might want to play with the clouds, sky a bit...the default Bryce sky works well in a lot of pics (I've overused it, myself :^) ), but somehow this pic seems to need a little extra color or something...perhaps someone else who understands what I mean can give more specific ideas for that. Don't worry about Posette (I think that's her) being bald. The way you've posed her, it doesn't show. One last thing, she seems to be levitating. You might want to try to set her down on the mountain's surface, unless you want her to hover, that's OK, too. :^)
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Aldaron posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 5:04 PM
Might want to vary the size of the trees so they aren't so uniform. Other than what's already been suggested I can't think of anything. Good start just needs a bit of tweaking.
Andini posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 5:26 PM
I noticed the same thing with the trees and I've checked...the Posette should be ON the mountain. I'm going to learn how to make custom skies soon but for now, I'll check around the presets.
lsstrout posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 5:41 PM
I thought she was at the high point of a jump for joy.... You might consider a beach between the grass and the water. Lin
TheBryster posted Wed, 08 January 2003 at 5:50 PM
In Poser, select the hair and then find the drop down that has the line 'parent to...' Select 'HEAD'. Export your figure as a Wavefront OBJ and check that the hair is listed in the list of objects. Your figure's hair should export right along with the head! Lower the trees on your pic so that the roots don't show so much. Add a TERRAIN for the background and experiment with the sky setings or select an alternative sky. Changing the light direction will give your figure a shadow to make it more obvious that she is jumping in the air. Apart from all that, experiment, experiment, experiment...and welcome to the forum!! Regards The Bryster
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Colette1 posted Thu, 09 January 2003 at 11:07 AM
You could just maybe move her to the left and back slightly. Looks like her left foot is on the ground and her right foot is kind of off the rock. Definitely a different rock texture and maybe some mountains of the same rock texture on the horizon line? Overall, a great beginning!:)