I have tried working on what both Erlik and rj001 suggested. This is how it came out. How does it look now? Have a feeling that maybe now if I do a thumb concentrating one two salient features to bottom left of the image, and post it to my gallery I will probably get more hits than anything else I have posted to the bryce gallery, and that includes the image that put me briefly in the bryce hot twenty. What do you reckon? I personally am still proud of the fact that "There was a time" made the chart, and this would tend to cheapen my reason for making images, but it is a fact

The greatest part of wisdom is learning to develop  the ineffable genius of extracting the "neither here nor there" out of any situation...."