Forum: Writers


Subject: friend in the dark!

Tanialmeida opened this issue on Feb 03, 2003 ยท 6 posts


Tanialmeida posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 8:43 AM

an image becomes a word ... a word becomes a voice ... a voice becomes a friend an eternal bridged in the darkness between us!


tjames posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 4:06 PM

The brevity of your words suggest it would be good to support a graphic. That's what I'm all about. Did you have something in mind? You know greeting card companies make millions by combining these two elements (just a suggestion)


Tanialmeida posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 5:29 PM

that is a good suggestion yes
i did this poem dedicated to online friends
they are so so so very important to me!
my words they come often like spoken words
smtimes very short suitable for a postard u
are right this could perfectly go along my
2D work piece AliEnWarM


Shoshanna posted Tue, 04 February 2003 at 2:45 AM

This is beautiful. :-)



Tanialmeida posted Tue, 04 February 2003 at 6:17 AM

thank u shoshanna ;0] U are very kind!


Crescent posted Wed, 05 February 2003 at 8:16 PM

Very nice with the parallelism in the lines. You got the flow going without beating us over the heads with it. I'm confused on one line, though:

an eternal bridged in

Did you mean:

an eternal bridge in

Cheers!