Zanny opened this issue on Feb 16, 2003 ยท 4 posts
Zanny posted Sun, 16 February 2003 at 3:17 PM
TCSP posted Sun, 16 February 2003 at 6:35 PM
lol! love the meta-birds... very good composition... youve broken up the horizon with good cloud cover and given the viewer a good sence of depth with the floating terrains leading the eye... that one terrain in the mid-right bg though, looks like it could go... its so far and a part of the cloud cover, if you can drop a cloud there, you wouldnt miss it and it would clean up density a bit.
Zanny posted Mon, 17 February 2003 at 1:56 PM
thanks for viewing although not 100% sure which terrain you mean, one of the green ones or the icy one?
TCSP posted Mon, 17 February 2003 at 2:09 PM
yeah the icy one.... i missed it the first few times i saw the image then caught it as i was posting the above... great job overall with the floating terrains... it might help to break up the under-side of those terrains though, so it doesnt look like the mirrored image of the top like it is. if your going for that uniqueness. composition tip unless the symetry (not necissarily side by side) is what your going for. stick with odd numbered objects like 3 metabirds... three terrains or five of whatever... less is more... ~;)