Forum: Bryce

Subject: February Challenge. . ."God of Bryce: The Control Room"- Final

nuski opened this issue on Feb 19, 2003 · 12 posts

nuski posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 8:45 AM

. . . . . negating the 'withdrawal" post. . . . made some changes as suggested and some of my own (hopefully for the better!) . . . . no long winded explanation this time. . . . ALL critiques and comments welcome !!!!!!!!

tjohn posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 9:37 AM

I liked the original post. This is even better. Glad you changed your mind, nuski. Great job!

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

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Claymor posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 9:47 AM

Excellent! And while I do morn the loss of the computer operators hand I do marvel at his now highly advanced powers of telekenesis and telepathy. The background space scene is much crisper too...excellent work!!

TheBryster posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 10:29 AM Forum Moderator

I'm afraid I found this a bit confusing....but then I only have half a brain! Nice work! The Bryster

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And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...

Colette1 posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 10:49 AM

Have you thought of modeling the hand yourself in terrain editor? Here is a quick one I did....not very good, but gives you the general idea. I am glad you reconsidered too.:) Claymors mourning of the hand gave me the idea to post this.

BlueArdor posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 10:55 AM

Yes! Glad you changed your mind too... and I think the drape replacement fits much better too... ... I dont see it as "confusing", I see it as the imagination at it's best. Imagination as the God of Bryce!

lsstrout posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 11:50 AM

Glad you rejoined, Nuski! I think the changes you made enhanced the picture. Lin

Rayraz posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 12:09 PM

Glad to see you re-entered the image. It looks even better then the last one. You've got good chances of getting my vote for this image.

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Ang25 posted Wed, 19 February 2003 at 4:24 PM

My fears are justified, an even better entry than the last. Glad you decided to enter. I love that pedestal that you described how to make. and the rest of the picture is awesome as well.

antevark posted Thu, 20 February 2003 at 12:30 AM

so how exactly do u do the curtains....?

catlin_mc posted Thu, 20 February 2003 at 1:06 PM

This is way better in every dimension, makes for a much stronger image. Well done. Catlin

tatjana posted Tue, 25 February 2003 at 7:23 PM

It looks inviting and scary at the same time. Antique and futuristic both. Nicely balanced.