Now it rhymes !!!!!!!!!! not perfecly, but it does...send me a dictionary if I "still" don't understand... Through Courtesy of Mr. ALAIN SOUCHON_"C'EST COMME VOUS VOULEZ" Song by ALAIN SOUCHON_french singer "IT'S GONNA BE YOUR WAY"_ (Un-published Tranlation by Klaus_can publish it now, I want no copyright, (just free of taxes for my friends in rocking bands)& dedicated to all in this "writers-forum." <<<<< Without any opinion, I'm a singer, I am your disciple for all of your liars. Honnor and Human Ethics I don't know those things Cool, cool, I use to follow your routines I can do pretty fine monkeys- sittin 'n play-in Saying "cocaine" Or a video-clip of Heavy hard-rock Saying "Pearl-Harbroke" You say: "Samba, well it's great, whoow" Then I'll do you the samba-guetto" You're saying": "Do the beguine, Okay !" Oh, yeah, I will do you the Rasta Man Gay Sheep, Sheep, Submitted, docile, without any rebellion "Beh, beh", I will follow you, Legion All what you like I'll like singing: din', don' (Refrain:} It's gonna be your way... It's gonna be your way... To where you will go, I'll go. It's gonna go just if you said so" ...IF YOU SAID SO !... I followed you to Hanoi In order to save your Empire, gay, Obediant little boy, Yeah ! Bye-bye, we gotta get out" got out, Mac Standing, lying down, I give you my pow, Hack I followed, for the Honnor, the horror anyway Panurgis following Sheep in this falling way You say: "Meet ya, okay, guy, in Kabul ?" And then, so, I'm charging up to Kabul. You say:"Go to Santiago". Then, to Santiago, I go, do yo wanna go? Sheep, sheep, Submitted, docile, ain't rebellion ship Beh, beh ! I'll follow your rule I got my whole soul Will follow War or Peace 'Cos, you know, we alrady practice {Refrain} Ku Klux Clan, Daddy-Cool, GreenPeace While Moon Sect's is going to piss, Karl-Marx-Brothers, and nice so childish Dollar, Bob Dylan in your limousine-Benzine-Cars Or like some youngster modern Nazis Scholars. {Refrain-finale} It's gonna be your way.... It's gonna be your way.... To where you will go, I'll go. It's gonna be your way, but where the heck do you go ? But,just: Do you just know where you go? ..Where yo go ??? >>>> French Original title: 'C'est comme vous voulez" Lyrics by Alain Souchon,(translated by me) Music: Laurent Voulzy You think America's gonna play "Life of Brian" with me or any other ones ? Nope ! _I love you, Americans, but, please, no "tien-anmen" lectures" neither more "Bright side of Life" YOU will see someday, that no "aticular" country's going to own this planet. It "rhymes" ! Are you all happy, now ? Send me free of taxes any American rhyme dictionary. What peety crime have Ibeen found gukty of ? Violence against violence is required. It is peaceful. Thanks to understand and I hope you can take it without those totally irrelevants 'ban-threats'. It rhymes now, I know it's not execellent, but there no "Roman soldiers" teaching me how to be correct or not. _Life of Brian-Monty Pythons) SO,...you are welcome NOW for helpful comment, so I can make the poem better,(I still want to make aood english speaking songto release a CD_Courtesy of Alain Souchon' Record Company., and I wouldn't want imperfections.) I'm sure I will do maybebetter and stronger than this one, anyway, I lldo it... because "we learn until our last breath" _My dying father said that to me. But, as for me, I am still young (born in 1968) Love ya. Byebye.

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I use this site a lot for rhymes. Hope it helps. jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Thanks Jon !I might use this site, great !, but I'll ask my Ameican guitarist too.(which is just french, but...)

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-Klaus, if you want to post here to improve your writing skills, including verse, that is fine. Using this forum for political debates is not the purpose of this forum. That's what the OT Forum is for. Posts created for the sole purpose of political debates will be bumped to the proper forum. They've been bumped from other forums as well. My first suggestion would be to run your song through an English spell checker. There are a lot of misspellings in the translation. It's difficult to say whether some words are mistranslated, misspelled, or aren't meant to be translated (they're just sounds.)

je ne compre..;)pardon my French..I seem to remember the Romans had something to say about correct grammar..;) (now write that 50 times or I'll...;) s'ahright, I think I get the gist of it..romanii ite domum?..;)

I wish I'd said that.. The Staircase Wit

anahl nathrak uth vas betude doth yel dyenvey..;)