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Subject: Winds of Change Challenge Entry

Charmz opened this issue on Mar 11, 2003 ยท 6 posts


Charmz posted Tue, 11 March 2003 at 8:55 AM

This time without the msnese of word. I never could resist a challenge. So, here it be.. At What Price? Age, too high a price to pay for wisdom, Knowledge is not worth the bitter price paid; Nor, the passing of the plans youth has laid, That tumble to earth like withered blossoms. Flesh once firm and soft withers and weathers, Beauty dims and character takes over; Hands that once soothed and caressed a lover; Are grained now like the finest of leathers. Yet, a mischievous twinkle in her eye, And a childlike wonder at all abound; Though life may batter her body around, Her soul still remembers the way to fly. From youth to age our heroine marches, With head held high; if on falling arches! 14 lines, 8 whine, 4 volta, 2 conclusion all in heroic syllabus.. told ya i knew the rules :D